I’ve been happily experimenting with haiku today. Some of them are traditional format, and others are sentence haikus (the syllable break would be in the middle of a word). It’s something a little different for me, since I’m typically opposed to structure, so tell me what you think! 🙂
I drank the sea
without really tasting it
and still slept til six
Peach slices with lunch
before the green tea. I’m out
3. Rose-Colored Telescope Lenses
All my stars still take
their sweet little time. It’s mine
to decide. I don’t.
Break open the mirror again. It worked enough the first time we tried.
I always want to start a poem with the word whispers. I don’t know.
6. Sailor’s Left Behind
The boat is still waiting outside. I know; you’ve made up your mind. Godspeed